Final+Paper+Edits



Hello everyone,

Here are my edits. Again, I edited for tense, consistency, grammar, and in-text references. I've highlighted remaining questions about references, so please take a look and post info on any updates. Any questions, please message me on Moodle.

Thanks! Tactical Tanya

Draft 2 is right here..thanks, Rambo



ALL:

Here is the latest version. Any comments or edits must be made by 4:00 PST! Any comments or edits must be saved in a word doc (please save your version with a different file name so I can easily keep track of the versions). I will post the final document this evening around 6:00 PST in a PDF. (That time may be later if there are a lot of changes recommended; however I will notify you if that is the case). FS.



ALL:

I added Toucan Sam(antha)'s images and headings into the document. Those are the only changes I made.



Updates with some changes - NEED NEW IMAGE FOR CONCLUSION. HELP!

Hi TEam SS-11:00 PST

I made some minor edits like Calendar Girls from Calendar girls-- added or editied citations etc. the big change was adding a space between paragraphs which changed the formatting! I tried to fix it and make it look better- Katie or Randy, if you want to fix it more-pls do so! I also changed the file name to relfect our huge group effort! Not to take away from your creative efforts Rambo! :P I'ts looking absolutley wonderful!!!!!!! and yes I corrected more typos that I just demonstrated above! :) - Hey KK! Looks awesome!! No worries on the title change, I was just saving it that way on my computer so I would be able to find it easily - I figured we would change the title to a formal group name once we completed it! Thanks for all your hard work KK - it has been a pleasure to have you in the group! - RAMBO

Team if you can't open the ZIP file below, go to Moodle and access the other version of the WORD DOC with same label. I can't get the WORD doc to upload here! aaaaargh!!!! KK 11:30 PST Hi

KK--still having trouble! can you please try copying & pasting the changed text into moodle? I'll fix formatting when I merge into Randy's doc. FS 1:10 PST


 * Firestarter and TEAM - here is Kathy's document resaved as a word document - so you should have no issues downloading and viewing it!! I don't think the formatting needs any changing or correcting either. I think it looks great! - RAMBO**

I think the "final" edits are getting a little out of control, but I will offer this one last thing. I think it looks odd to have a section header & image separated from the start of the section by a page break. So I've fixed that in the two places where it happens. It does create extra space at the bottom of a couple of pages, but I think it's appropriate. **Katie**, I trust your judgement, so if you choose to ignore these edits, that's absolutely fine with me. Thanks for all you're doing.

Alright...the end is very near. Below find the PDF & Word Doc. The only change I see that needs to happen is for Rambo to make the red squiqqilies disapear on the coverpage graphic. I tried a few ways with no success. Other than that I believe we are looking great.

If anyone finds any other chagnes; please correct in the Word ﻿**//__rename__//** ﻿the file so I don't get them mixed up :) and post back here before 5:30 PST. Thanks all! FS 3:01 PST



Somehow this might erase some of Rambo's comments...not sure what's up with that...but sorry if it happens (FS, 3:05 PST)

Here is the version without the red squiggles. I need a cocktail! LOL Rambo

Rambo....hate to bug you //again//....but Toucan is missing on the by-line again :( Hopefully just a quick fix. Anyone else have any changes? I'm going to sign off now for a little bit to finish off my work day...I'll be back on at 5:30 PST to get the final draft and will post the final draft at 6:00 pm PST...or a little sooner if there are no more edits. High five all!



OH MY LORD - someone shoot me please. Here ya go. SORRY SAMANTHA!!

Final PDF is posted on Moodle! 5:50 PST! I'm taking the rest of the night off from the jungle...back tomorrow!